By David Drake
Considering the number of titles this author has out I considered this to be a good chance or investment in reading a new author who I would not leave me stranded. I’m going to keep this short.
The story line(s) are good, character development is good and the scenes were well done without hand waving too much on the science. It is unfortunate that the editing and the quality of the end product were so heinous. The text has “1” where there should be “I”s. There are misspelled, misused and misplaced words throughout this work.
Normally I might cut slack to Indies and self-pubs on this somewhat but it looks like the author didn’t do a post production read here. Those of you who are used to my reviews know that I like to pay forward good vibes. I am very sorry that it would be a disservice to the reader if I did so here. In the form I received this I will only give this book two out of five thumbs up.
I agree, it’s awkward when too many technical glitches ruin an otherwise good story.