by Stephen Oleander
I found the story of Craig and Veronica growing apart because of their separate experiments to be the major pull of this work. Well done on that. As each of the partners use a device to fulfill their individual fantasies they find that they are pulling away from each other.
I’m not convinced that the author needed quite the extensive variety of fantasy erotica in order to do justice to this novella, perhaps a little less would go a lot further. There is a line, laughable by some, between erotica and porn. They each have a goal and everyone’s perception of where that line resides is different. My line was crossed in this work.
A note on editing. The author needs to have a couple passes to make corrections as there are misspellings, misused and just plain missing words. Though I have read a review copy which I did not pay for I have noticed that this is a novella length work being offered as a $3 eBook.
Everything mentioned to this point drives me to give a three out of five stars rating and that is based on the emotional plot work involved with Craig and Veronica.